People change, its so very true,
but u wer amongst dos few,
who were wid me thru thick n thin,
evn in worst, togethr v have been.
In the dark, u were my sun,
in dismay, to you i had clung,
it was always the same with u,
searching 4 me, wen u were in blue.
Where have dos days gone?
or dey r here wid u begone?
I dont undrstnd what has changd?
Is it u or the friendship i claimed?
19 comments:
that's beautiful!
Nice poem... I feel this question pops in many a lives. But you have beautiful captured them in those stanzas.
a person with a heart to feel can only write these emotions, if u miss ur friend dont let him go, hold your friend strong and let him/her kno that u want him/her in ur life, i bet ur friend doesnot know about ur feelings that well.
any way chinkss keep up the good work write more, as i always said u can b so much more.(keep proving me right)
angel: thanks:)
suresh: yeah many can relate demselvs wid dis. just an attempt to make dos gone frnds realize wat dey r missing.thanks!:)
sun: i guess u need not tell ur frnds how do u feel 4 dem.evrythng is jst undrstud. newaz it wsnt abt my frnds in person. u kno dem jst too well.dey r d bst bunch of frnds i can evr have(incl u ofcors).its abt frnds in gnrl.
thanks for ur faith in me.
I love this poem. It really touch mah hrt....
deepak: thanx :)
Change is essential... As somebody once stated...Change is the only thing you can be sure about... we change and so do the people around us... but when they were here and when we were here, what we were is what it makes...
faery of wilds:
changes happen, but wen people so close to u change u really want them to b wat dey usd to b. but yes v cant b sure abt nethng n hav 2 move on....
Nice words woven nicely. :) When close friends change their attitude then it is really hurtung.
@ chandrika
True..
Hey! It seems that it already hppn wid U. And now, ur feelings comes out wid this beautiful words.
By d way, nice work dear....
u havnt read my cmnts i suppose. i hv got d bst of frnds i can evr hv. its just a gnrl idea.
expectations increase with time...
and we're never able to cut them down...
but some times..people do more than what we expect...
ahhh...a relationship...called friendship
Some of the biggest disappointments in life happen when you get stabbed by your closest friends. Cant help it.
heyy,,b'ful yaar..too gdd...ders so mch of emotions in dis..i lv it...along wit tme,,piple also do change...newz,,u write awsummm...i apreciate ur thoughts swthrt....lvu..mis u...tc...
Awesome work Sweety... True Friends never change. The respect that they have for you never changes. Only thing that changes is the amount of time we spend together. Those days will not come back. Because they were special.
I am glad that our friendship has the same warmth that we used to have in those days. Although we are far apart, our friendship dwells for ever.
prashslash:
if 1 stabs u dey wer nvr ur frnds. closest frnds can fight wid u, b ngry on u n evn ignore u but nvr stab u.
tasha:
thanks. luv u too :)
shobhan:
true yaar. i am glad of our frndshp too. thanks:)
time has changed..people around us have changed. u n i r the same..u wud kno if v r 2gether agn..at som point of tym..dont kno wen..wish 2 c u agn..laugh out loud, cry n dance wit u..n never let u go.miss u dear..miss our days 2gether..
miss u too buttrfly ;)
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